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Post by Nucky Sun May 27, 2012 10:23 pm

Saw this on another forum. This is simpler than the Renga thread and is more freeform. The only rules are contribute one line at a time and don't make two consecutive posts. Other than that, it can be as freeform as you wish. I'll start.

As I greeted the new day and ventured outside
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Post by Alethia Mon May 28, 2012 1:23 am

a gentle breeze touched my face
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Post by unicorn13 Mon May 28, 2012 6:43 am

the suns rays nourished me with their warm embrace
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Post by tezorian Mon May 28, 2012 9:56 am

7 birds flew up to welcome this new day
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Post by Reamsie Mon May 28, 2012 10:02 am

then gently landed and began to serenade me with their song
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Post by BlueTopaz Mon May 28, 2012 2:03 pm

7 melodies entwined to make one single canticle.
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Post by jasmine Mon May 28, 2012 4:24 pm

i closed my eyes, entranced
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Post by melodiccolor Mon May 28, 2012 4:35 pm

drifting away on the trilled notes sang
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Post by Nucky Tue May 29, 2012 3:40 am

Up to a place where serenity reigned
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Post by Alethia Tue May 29, 2012 3:45 am

I floated on a cloud of nothingness
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Post by melodiccolor Tue May 29, 2012 2:01 pm

while musical notes drifted surrounding
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Post by Clueless Tue Jun 05, 2012 4:44 pm

An apperition of the fallen Madonna with the big boobbies by van Kumft
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Post by melodiccolor Tue Jun 05, 2012 7:40 pm

wandered through the middle
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Post by Nucky Tue Jun 05, 2012 8:22 pm

taking lustful glances at me
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Post by Clueless Tue Jun 05, 2012 8:24 pm

while soothingly playing the fiddle
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Post by melodiccolor Tue Jun 05, 2012 8:34 pm

and grinning laviously
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Post by Clueless Tue Jun 05, 2012 11:49 pm

As her Boobies whispered True Love
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Post by Clueless Thu Jun 07, 2012 1:06 am

as he was so short they whispered from above
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Post by Alethia Thu Jun 07, 2012 2:45 am

and heavenly snowflakes landed on his balding head
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Post by mtngrl123 Thu Jun 07, 2012 8:00 am

the bitter cold of the snow burned him
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Post by Alethia Thu Jun 07, 2012 8:31 am

and his heart ignited in flames
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Post by Clueless Thu Jun 07, 2012 3:12 pm

A burnt offering to the boobies above
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Post by melodiccolor Thu Jun 07, 2012 4:03 pm

which then sprouted wings and flew
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Post by Clueless Thu Jun 07, 2012 4:40 pm

In ever decreasing circles
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Post by Alethia Thu Jun 07, 2012 5:23 pm

he moved his hands in time..
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Post by melodiccolor Thu Jun 07, 2012 7:15 pm

and caught the flying birds
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Post by Alethia Thu Jun 07, 2012 7:50 pm

nested them into a cosy cocoon
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Post by melodiccolor Thu Jun 07, 2012 10:39 pm

where they then made holes for wings to spread
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Post by Alethia Thu Jun 07, 2012 11:14 pm

and fed each day on tasty morsels
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Post by Nucky Thu Jun 07, 2012 11:15 pm

given lovingly from above
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